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Journey

Baffled by the spurious light,

I started embracing pure darkness.

I hear the whispers,

I hear the clappings.

I feel the pulse of this madding crowd.

I feel the mystery scripted within,

All colours are roaming naked

with lebels.

I am sinking in the unfathomable darkness,

There is no lie,no hoax no adulterated joy..

🌷(3)

◄ I know..

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Comments

<Deleted User> (17799)

Sat 10th Nov 2018 13:31

I love this, very dark indeed but everyone goes through something sometimes... stay strong!

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 7th Nov 2018 21:12

Dark but beautiful Avishek..❤

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Douglas MacGowan

Wed 7th Nov 2018 18:35

A very good capturing of a downward spiral. I hope that if this reflects your current reality that you climb back into the light.

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