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The sad end

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The sad end

Wednesday,8th November 2018

 

You were mistaken

it wasn't taken rightly

I dreamed about a happy journey

but you had a doubt in mind already

 

love moves like wheels

if it has a steel will

that kills any doubt arising

and never causes surprise

 

I thought I would be the person

who may have a beautiful vision

about the life and its mission

sans any kind of confusion

 

I was shattered

when you uttered

about the separation

I was mentally shaken and bodily broken

 

to whom was I to address?

and face

the consequences in real

today I sit in the corner and feel

 

I blame no one

but no good was done

the cruel fate played the game

I was not in the position to tame

 

Neither could I recover

not could offer

you the reconciliation

it was the sad end of our relation

 

Hasmukh Mehta

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 9th Nov 2018 09:38

Full of emotion and a sad beauty......❤

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Douglas MacGowan

Fri 9th Nov 2018 01:33

Good poem. I especially liked the “I thought I would be the person...” stanza.

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