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Adieu, but not forever

The wave on the stairs

was no final farewell,

but a resounding adieu

repeating we will meet again.

Glimpsing your fading eyes

a distance away now

still pronouncing their beautiful hue

and glistening under a single tear

mirroring the evening dew.

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adieu

◄ Autumn leaves to be reborn

Wanderings ►

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Fri 7th Dec 2018 13:06

Poignant, beautiful.

Hannah

Big Sal

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 03:21

Short but exquisite.?

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 24th Nov 2018 09:00

Thank you, Keith and Taylor.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 24th Nov 2018 08:40

Such an impactful verse Jon, beautiful. Thank you ?

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keith jeffries

Fri 23rd Nov 2018 21:55

Sadness, beauty and simplicity. I was taken immediately there.

Thank you for this

Keith

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