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Scot,a sad loss

Brenda had just lost her husband Scot,

A serious infection he had recently got.

A newspaper notice announcing his death was the next thing,

She gave the local newspaper a quick ring.

 

"What would you like to say ?"said the clerk at the end of the line.

"Scot has sadly passed away would be just fine."

"You can put  a few extra words in at no extra charge."

"Okay,Scot has sadly passed away,for sale canal  barge."

 

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 25th Nov 2018 17:51

Excellent Hugh..?

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Alan Travis Braddock

Sun 25th Nov 2018 11:16

Did he say anything about a spanner?
Nice one Hugh.

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