A few words were said in anger
but their inferences vanished
when the tear ducts began to swell
and a lump suffocated me
and you just retreated further
and still haven’t quite returned home.
I almost lost you and still feel
Like I did.
Wow, a really great capture of sad feelings in a very few words.
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<Deleted User> (19913)
Wed 5th Dec 2018 11:56
Neil, I've come back to this a second time. You've captured that moment of a shift in a relationship so perfectly. Beautiful work.