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a song

Happiness is like a song

it never goes beyond 10 minutes

of course you can play it anew

once or two but one too many times

and boredom will visit you

 

now all you have to do

is hope for a redo

hope for the next song

to come along

and keep you company

 

if your lucky a bit

your song will be a hit

you’ll give it a name

and live with it

and make sure it's always in a good mood

 

but if you’re like me

singing is the key

to stop demanding 

from an earth that's so moody

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◄ a tinkerer's heart

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racha chafik

Sun 13th Jan 2019 11:12

thank you john and poe for reading and taking time to comment on my poem i appreciate it ??

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John Marks

Sun 13th Jan 2019 00:18

You like the music of poetry. That's so good. Don't be downhearted. You are doing so well. If English is not your first language then your facility is superb. Good luck as a writer. John

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