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forgotten dreams

In two eyes just one dream

living through one stream

if I was told the scheme

would I have stayed

 

silence filled with thoughts

no place for hidden spots

who wouldn’t have sought

for ever more

 

but time took your heart

and now we grew apart

i wonder when I did start

to look away

 

now in my lonely nights

you visite as sweet sad sights

and in the morning lights

you disappear

🌷(5)

◄ a song

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Phillip Kelly

Thu 4th Jul 2019 22:42

Theres something really emotional in the recurring theme of sight and vision in this poem.... Through the eyes to dreams to reality.... Really conveyes the feeling of a closeness developing into growing moving further apart..... Lovely poem

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