Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

easy roads

the road begins with mighty hopes

walking down the rocky roads

she dips and drops an then she gropes

the dream of gods and all the odds

and then she meets the strangest folks

that turn around and speak with codes

that live and laugh and then tell the jokes

about people of the rocky roads

and sell the dreams meant to provoke

her gods the odds and the mighty hopes

and all they sing the word awoke

and easy roads and cozy boats

an ocean that’s not meant to soak

hey eyes bigger feet’s afloat

she walks until she finally broke

the dream the jokes and all the boats

to see inside a bigger joke

something that will much provoke

but this time not the gods and odds

a life filled with the mighty hopes

a wining strike a lucky stroke

her insides and all her oaths

sad again she drips and drops

and gropes again to the mighty gods

but now and then she flies and floats

her heart demands the easy roads

an action worth of harder drops

🌷(5)

◄ forgotten dreams

message ►

Comments

Profile image

Graham Sherwood

Sat 6th Jul 2019 20:54

There are so many things I would change about this piece but I find it incredibly compelling. If this is a example of your work I am very impressed.

Profile image

racha chafik

Sat 6th Jul 2019 16:35

thank you devon for reading and commenting my work

Devon Brock

Sat 6th Jul 2019 11:24

Great use of word and sound repetition Racha.

D

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message