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December 24th Notebook Pieces

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Past 3 O’Clock
Still, the moon like 
frost across the bedroom 
floor.
-
Tonight
we find the language
we spoke as 
children
when our minds
were open
and our hearts 
young.
-
We hold hope within us,
like a little house
swelling with light
in the darkness
of a late 
December evening.
-
Awake,
listening to the gentle sounds
of those I love
sleeping 
nearby.
-
The candle 
in the window has made
a halo in the frost.
-
At one, two, three... nothing
Just the type of darkness
where memories are born.
-
Every hour
you come back to me,
soundless as snow 
in the noiseless dark.
-
Your ghost
passing in and out of the walls
as easy as you 
did my life.
-
The mind falls quiet
and travels the earth,
the troubles 
of the world
impenetrable
beyond the darkened
bed.
-
The world is still tonight,
the fields are white
and calm with 
loneliness.
-
Let us be true to one another,
as best as we're able.

 

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Alan Travis Braddock

Fri 11th Jan 2019 13:55

Poignant words, Tom, tenderly expressed.. Sorrow can bring out the best of poetry in the gifted - unfortunately. I expect that this is no consolation - but it may help at the time.

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Wed 2nd Jan 2019 23:43

Exquisite Tom.

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John Marks

Wed 2nd Jan 2019 22:07

If brevity is truly the soul of wit your style, Tom, stretches a few words a long way. Your nod to Matthew Arnold's masterpiece of loss sent shivers up my spine - another haunting of one poet by another and me the ever-willing exorcist!

Ah, love, let us be true
To one another! for the world, which seems
To lie before us like a land of dreams,
So various, so beautiful, so new,
Hath really neither joy, nor love, nor light,
Nor certitude, nor peace, nor help for pain;
And we are here as on a darkling plain
Swept with confused alarms of struggle and flight,
Where ignorant armies clash by night.

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raypool

Thu 27th Dec 2018 14:45

The essence of true poetry comes across as always - the senses set wide open to subtleties and never disappointed, Tom. A delicacy of feeling pervades it and touches the reader with a magic wand full of starshine.

I'll get my coat.

Ray

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Wed 26th Dec 2018 14:21

Beautiful poetry.

Hannah

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Douglas MacGowan

Tue 25th Dec 2018 01:38

I can feel a sense of coziness after reading this piece.

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