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Rat race

The smoke from your shoes has left me coughing.

By the looks of your speed

Noway!!!  you are stopping.

You ran so fast and yet you did not come first.

but neither did he & nor did she

Not until I will  become we.

Rat race ! Rat race

What a disgrace. Fooling those who have not found their place. 

Happiness is a choice and not a destination

Prioritize your life and be happy with your creation.

Do not compare ' your life to another. 

Thats the reason why we have different mothers.

The only thing that remains the same is believing that love only conquers this game..

Rat race oh rat race why are you here. Actions of governments should all disappear..

Stop and breathe and let it sink in

That you hold the power to change and win

 

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lisa donohoe

Fri 4th Jan 2019 16:09

So grateful for your feed back.. Thank you so much

<Deleted User> (16837)

Fri 4th Jan 2019 15:31

Stop and breathe and let it sink in

That you hold the power to change and win

your last couplets are all magic in your poems.... and i simply adore it❤

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