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The Matriach

The Matriarch

 

Swaying gently in the breeze,
I am one of the tall pine trees.
Needles fall like rain,
upon the forest's counterpane.

 

Cones like hailstones to the ground.
The forest animals alert to every sound.
Stirrings from the forest floor, 
I wait to oversee proceedings,
a performance which I am leading.

 

You dare to sit on my branches birds.
I shake you off, you flock,
as if you dare to mock.

 

The shadow which I cast afar,
reaching upwards to the stars.

 

I am the overseer,
the matriarch.
The immense tower of bark.

 

My roots an anchor from the wind,
my branches home to those with wings.

 

I have stood for decades here,
the forest over which I preside,
the creatures who use my trees to hide.

 

This forest of pine..dozey but never completely asleep.
Throughout the seasons we can see,
the comings and goings amongst the trees.

 

Stand I will for decades more,
until finally my time will come.
When I will hear the deafening roar,
and the machine will arrive with its mighty saw.

 

 

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

An excerpt from The Tracings of my Shadow

◄ Greed

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john short

Sun 8th Sep 2019 10:47

Yes, the last stanza is quite powerful and sad. It's worth remembering that when trees are chopped down how much wildlife also suffers due to the loss of habitat "my branches home to those with wings".

Have you sent this anywhere? If not, you could try Obsessed with Pipework. Editor has an affinity for nature. I've failed to get in recently but still trying.

Regards

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Peter Taylor

Tue 26th Mar 2019 17:28

I really enjoyed The Matriarch, not least because it gave me comfort that you were still contributing (I sensed some weeks back that it was a while since I'd read any of your poems or otherwise heard from you).

Like a number of your readers, I am hooked on trees and I love the words that you have used to declare your infatuation too.

Peter T

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Martin Elder

Sun 10th Mar 2019 15:39

I am have a particular love of trees so this means a lot. A wonderful poem Taylor
Love it

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Fri 1st Mar 2019 23:16

How I've missed you Taylor. Your words will sustain me today.

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Rick Varden

Sat 2nd Feb 2019 00:06

You should send it in to The Forestry Commission Taylor. However, don’t expect too much, I’ve just had a rejection from them and they don’t give feedback, great poem though? On second thoughts don’t send it, they don’t appreciate good poetry.

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John Marks

Sat 19th Jan 2019 04:50

Hello Taylor. I loved this and it put me in mind of 'Binsey Poplars' by the great English Jesuit poet GM Hopkins:

Binsey Poplars
By Gerard Manley Hopkins

felled 1879

My aspens dear, whose airy cages quelled,
Quelled or quenched in leaves the leaping sun,
All felled, felled, are all felled;
Of a fresh and following folded rank
Not spared, not one
That dandled a sandalled
Shadow that swam or sank
On meadow & river & wind-wandering weed-winding bank.

O if we but knew what we do
When we delve or hew —
Hack and rack the growing green!
Since country is so tender
To touch, her being só slender,
That, like this sleek and seeing ball
But a prick will make no eye at all,
Where we, even where we mean
To mend her we end her,
When we hew or delve:
After-comers cannot guess the beauty been.
Ten or twelve, only ten or twelve
Strokes of havoc unselve
The sweet especial scene,
Rural scene, a rural scene,
Sweet especial rural scene.

John

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 8th Jan 2019 21:13

Thank you Jane and Po for the comments.
Thank you Brian, Jon, Alan and Dolly for reading and liking the poem..x

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Tue 8th Jan 2019 14:39

The trials and tributes of being a tree...wonderful Taylor!?

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