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Wretch-ed and Fetch-ed

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Wretch-ed and Fetch-ed

 

Where's the fun gone from the site?

It's serious , so boringly wretched

It seems the more serious the better

More likes and more comments is fetch-ed

 

I know wretched/ fetch-ed makes no sense

They make nonsense verse 'tween us both

Pray may I end with some Shakespeare nonsense?

There needs more WOL fun I quote doth

 

Don Matthews December 2018

 

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Jan 2019 22:49

I forgot to mention the 'etherial'
Poems which float in the air
Much comment and likes do accompany them
I can't follow them, (so I despair)?

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Jan 2019 22:37

WOLers seem to
Love to wallow
In doom and gloom
Yum! they swallow

I give them some
Lighter bits
No read/comment
Gives me the shits

They love depression
Real dark bits
Plenty comments
Gives me the shits

Trevor, Brian
Are others there
Who read my stuff?
Want light, who care?

Perhaps I should
Try blood and gore?
Plenty comments
By the score?

But that's not writing
For myself
'Gainst my grain
.........

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Trevor Alexander

Wed 16th Jan 2019 15:30

Yes, yes. We need a bit of fun to lighten the darkness.

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Wed 16th Jan 2019 14:35

Keep it light
Keep it bright
Don, keep on posting
your fun-filled shite.

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