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The Gift (Limerick)

The Gift  (Limerick)

At the end of a trip to Tibet

I brought home for my daughter a pet

"You fool," said her Mamma

"She asked for a 'LLAMA'

You're short of one 'L' I regret."

🌷(3)

HumourLimerickLlama

◄ Eternal

The Smug Bastard ►

Comments

Big Sal

Wed 30th Jan 2019 15:08

I personally wouldn't give him back.

Call it religious reasons.?

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raypool

Tue 29th Jan 2019 16:41

Nae worries David. The home of Billy Connolly, something to be proud of !


Ray

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Dave Caplan

Tue 29th Jan 2019 16:31

Ray,

Thank you so much for that constructive comment.
Until you mentioned it I would never in a thousand years have twigged anything was wrong,

It took me a couple of readings to figure out the reason was simply down to my Scottish upbringing, Glasgow in particular !

Sorted.

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raypool

Tue 29th Jan 2019 15:38

Limericks are a real test for the mind David but worth the effort. Bravissimo! If I could make a suggestion how about" home for my daughter" just to clarify that. With respect.

Ray

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