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Aerials

Aerials

 

In years past they possessed two shapes

one an X and the other a H

Today we look aloft to some like a farmers gate

now they arrive in all shapes and sizes

as new sophisticated models keep arising

I am intrigued by the variety of this new array

as new ones seem to appear every day

Strapped to the chimney of a nearby house

is one which resembles the cage of a mouse

Further along on the next road

is one similar to a lighting strobe

On the village square near to my relation

is one with the appearance of a tracking station

Some are like hideous contraptions

for mobile phones which have aroused passions

The latest invention is an underground cable

which will eventually all aerials disable

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All will be well ►

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keith jeffries

Sun 10th Feb 2019 14:56

Thank you all for your kind and constructive comments.

Po, your words illuminate problems which are easily overlooked and few are truly aware of. The very thought of marine life being so adversely affected by submarines is so dispiriting. We are called to be the custodians of the natural world but seem to be hell bent on its destruction.

Thank you all again.

Keith

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Sat 9th Feb 2019 22:41

It's the satellite dishes I can't stand. I've never had one. Good poem Keith.

Po you've got me really worried now but I trust you implicitly to come up with the solution.

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raypool

Sat 9th Feb 2019 21:31

I'm afraid my comment is a little stunted next to Po's, and while that is a serious assessment, I just wanted to say it was an enjoyable poem, and reminded me that I had to have a new aerial pointing away from Crystal Palace and down to Midhurst, whereby I have lost London news on BBC and have to put up with what happens in the southern towns Just as depressing I have to say .

All the best to you. Ray

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