child like
the snow whispers, gently falling
a child like dream revealed
Crisp white snow
upon a starched white path
To a wonderland I will go
To make a footprint
To slide along
To build a snowman
a carrot for his nose
Comments
Such beautiful imagery and brought a smile to my face! You had me reminiscing about being little and playing in the snow and how great that feeling is! Keep up the great work Desmond!
Sun 17th Feb 2019 19:52
Thank you Kate and Keith for your comments very much appreciated. Thank you. Thank you Jon, Anya,Lisa and Do for the likes.
All the best he best des
A delightful reminder of my childhood. A very good poem
Thank you for this
Keith
<Deleted User> (19913)
Sun 17th Feb 2019 09:22
You took me to a wonderland with this Desmond. Lovely poem.
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
DESMOND CHILDS
Fri 1st Mar 2019 08:19
Thank you Erin for your encouraging comments, much appreciated. Thank you Rachel and Damon for the likes
All the best des