The Noise of War
We were soldiers once.......and young
Call of duty was different them days
Earth clod grenades and sticks for guns
No gaming machines or blue rays
Battle lines were drawn in the street
We flew where eagles dare
No surrender, no retreat
And the noise of war filled the air
"Brrrrrrrrrrrraaa" the machine gun staccato of Mickey Tiatto
"Peeeeow" Slacky's ricochet rang
"Doof doof" was the laser of wee Tommy Fraser
Twitch's shotgun simply went "Bang"
Hand eye precision, life death decisions
Dying was an art form and nothing less,
than three pirouettes, would fail to impress
and be met with sarcastic derision.
I remember one day a thrown hand grenade
Got a right accolade
Such was the carnage and devastation
We stopped and gave the dead a standing ovation
But there was always one who refused to die.
Would stand and tell the bare faced lie.
Wouldn’t fall down, would argue and contest.
When it was clear to all and sundry they were shot squarely in the chest.
... and that's when the real fights would break out.
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<Deleted User> (21487)
Tue 19th Feb 2019 15:48
I love this poem, you have created a vivid picture that many will relate to.
You have even managed to make the boyhood voices echo down the years.
It is a joy to read and re-read.