Orbitter
Orbitter
love is a world hate the moon tidal are the moments I fell into the gravity of you
and round and round we go loops whorl as ancient without my suit on
or fall or rise as they are infinite blown from safety’s airlock
there is no up or down here kept us spun to each other and out into the void of this
light fasts in this ritual on an alien world the craft blasts off
of time and distance made of things unseen your in the window waving
I had hoped to explore your soft rain of words I’ve got no fuel to get home
your exotic landscape but the sky was dead maimed by your trajectory
kJ Walker
Sat 30th Mar 2019 07:38
I've never come across this form of poetry before. Is it a form that you have invented, or have I been missing something? Either way I think it's brilliant.
Cheers Kevin