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Handcuff

Was it me or was it you who died that night.. 
Those bridges mended weren't strong enough.. 
The bonding could not ascend any dizzying height..  
Was it me or was it you who died that night..
It wasn't a dream ever to expect a shining armor knight 
Our alliance to the world outside was a simple and charming bluff.. 
Was it me or was it you who died that night..
You lost my trust yet we are tied with a daunted cuff.. 

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paintreasonpoetry

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mona s

Sat 30th Mar 2019 17:12

Such delightful comments from you, Mae..?Sometimes while penning down thoughts ,there is a state of uncertainty..
Thanks for appreciating my style.. Definitely a good impetus for me.

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Mae Foreman

Fri 29th Mar 2019 20:15

You had me at the first line!
Thank you again?
Mae

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mona s

Wed 20th Mar 2019 06:27

Thanks ?

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Martin Elder

Sun 17th Mar 2019 19:07

I love the rhythm of this piece the gives it the extra pace that takes the reader with it.
Nice one

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