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VANILLA

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What was the chance i did know you ?

What was the chance we did be friends ?

What was the serendipity of me been in awe of you 

But here i am expressing how it feels

From your smile that captivates the and got me tripping every moment 

You are a manifestation of astonishing beauty 

A dime + 99 equals you

Your eyes are irresistibly stunning 

With the body of a goddess

Your character got me applauding 

your dancing ,just electric feel 

A sight of you every moment is worth the time.

 

ERES DIGNO DE LA ESPERA.

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◄ TEARS.

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Shalom Jordans

Tue 30th Jun 2020 13:07

I know right that what i felt when i was writing it... thank you for your comment and am glad you can relate to it

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Mon 29th Jun 2020 14:35

Head over heels kind of poetry.

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