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Antithesis

Antithesis

 

I am the silence when you are talking

When you travel by car I’ll be walking

When you are arguing I’ll be at peace

I’ll be the pages in the book you’ll be the crease

You’ll be the night I’ll be the star

Shining bright from afar

You’ll be the gun I’ll be the bird in flight

That you miss

You’ll be the punch I’ll be the kiss

You’ll be the heartache and I’ll be the bliss

 

I’ll be the antithesis to your thesis

As we collide in opposites as we attract

We will also repel

Who will win out who can tell

in this black and white world.

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Paul F Blackburn

Fri 8th Feb 2008 01:20

Nice poem Daniel but shouldn't it be called synthesis, after all that's what a thesis and antithesis produce innit?

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Thu 7th Feb 2008 20:04

Daniel

This is such a clever poem. I love the line "I'll be the antithesis to your thesis"...wonderful, wonderful.

Mel
xx

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