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can you look beyond the Shallow?

Can you look beyond the shallow?

To find a deeper meaning which is true.

Can you look beyond the shadows?

To find a philosophy for you

Can you find hope in times of madness?

to bring you through your despair

can you find strength and guidance

in the books over there

can you find faith

in actions good works and deeds done

can you find solace when the game is lost and not won

can keep both eyes open

when others with prejudice are opposed

can you find meaning where there seems to be none

,then my friend you’ll never lose and the battle will be half won.

For how we perceive and what we believe

Makes us whole

a heart that looks beyond the shallow

will find what it looks for it will find its goal.

◄ Antithesis

more than just words to me! ►

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Daniel Hooks

Tue 12th Feb 2008 22:12

I guess Sophie I am a believer in the spirtual although I am not sure I believe in a conventional God I think any God would be very much beyond the conventional and may well see beyond Good and evil or positive and negative as I like to call them as the God that I believe knows our actions and why even we didn't them (causality).

But ultimately this poem was meant as a kind of text poem for people who find hope and meaning in the everyday books lyrics in songs etc and make their own way in the world and their own philopsophy!

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Tue 12th Feb 2008 06:05

HI, Daniel

Yes you can find answer to each of these questions. Your poem is deep and has a spiritual tone in it!

"Can you find hope in times of madness?
to bring you through your despair
can you find strength and guidance
in the books over there
can you find faith
in actions good works and deeds done"

There is always a solution to each problem. Your poem shines. Very profound and thought provoking...Thank you for sharing...Zuzanna

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clarissa mckone

Tue 12th Feb 2008 03:30

HI Daniel,This is very nice! Yes I can see,Things are getting bad in this world and it seems it will get worse. But Faith in God will see us all through this.

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