cosmic fuck poem
the search for god becomes a suffocation
stab the fat star spill yolk across the sky
yellow a scream across the de-tuned darkness
touch my lips, breakdown this sunset songbird
Comments
elPintor
Sat 11th May 2019 16:37
It's great when you use color this way--like it was plucked right out of a scene in a film.
thanks keith, thats bang on what i was going for so great to hear thats what you took from it
Stu,
This sent my mind into a flurry of thought. I had to read it several times. It has a profound quality which provokes many images.The opening line struck me as I find the search for God frustrating and almost unachieveable. An excellent work and thank you for this.
Keith
thanks tom! lovely to see you back here
Awesome
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Stu Buck
Sat 11th May 2019 16:51
thanks both! glad you enjoyed it