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Sleep

Silken threads of the dreamy states.. 
Brings alive the moments hidden deep.. 
Lulled senses waltz to the rhythm of night 
Churned past with present by the reckless sleep
Bridging distances loved ones meet from different times..
A reunion,unimagined,an experience so sublime ..
Unreal, yet nothing so real a world.. 
Silent spectator,entrapped by the subconscious 
Watching layers of random thoughts unfurled.. 
The final sleep,mystery journey to the other side.. 
This, a mesmeric prelude, to everlasting opera.. 
Closest to where one's soul will truly reside.. 

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mona s

Wed 15th May 2019 05:27

Thank you Mae and Jane for taking out time to read and comment..Truly appreciate it.. ?

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Wed 15th May 2019 03:57

Well crafted. A different, intriguing take on 'sleep'. ?

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Mae Foreman

Tue 14th May 2019 16:43

Anothet great one Mona! I really do love your poetry!
Thank you?
Mae

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mona s

Tue 14th May 2019 05:10

Thanks Jason for reading and for your insightful remarks.. Really appreciate it..

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 13th May 2019 19:43

Really skillfully written beautiful bit of poetry, when you say it out loud it has a really nice lilting, slightly off beat rhythm. Love it Mona.

J. x

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