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The violin cries tears 

And sings of heartbreak songs 

Recounting the happy through its legatos 

The sad through its staccato 

The heartbreak through its ricochet 

and the final goodbye through its detaché.

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Chloé

Thu 13th Jun 2019 06:19

Thank you guys so much for the compliments !

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john short

Sat 1st Jun 2019 23:05

Hi Chloe

Nice poem. Yes every instrument is a universe with wonderful expressive powers. Words thoughtfully chosen!

John S

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afishamongmany

Mon 27th May 2019 14:58

Very delicatissimo Chloé. Bien fait.
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Jason Bayliss

Mon 27th May 2019 12:06

Absolutely enchanting. Beautiful words, skillfully put together.

J. x

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