Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

SHARING THE SUN

SHARING THE SUN                                                             

Summer morning I sit in worship

of a rising sun in a cloudless sky,

unblemished blue, almost too perfect

in a world discoloured by the human tide.

I’d like the warmth to slow us down,

with open eyes and emptied minds,

to let inside fine sights and sounds

then turn them into words that rhyme.

 

Looking down from a blank white page,

just a foot away from toasting feet,

away from the riot of the garden bloom,

this easy to miss floral treat:

in a crack between stone flag and mortar,

say six inches long, narrow and neat,

a dozen wild flowers stand together

and strain their necks towards the heat,

 

to reach the rays, the sun’s good work,

shared ambitions between them and me,

though when I shield my eyes or turn away,

to escape the full glare so as to see,

I notice that these flowers don’t flinch,

empowered, perhaps, by delicacy.

Cheeky, they outstare our fiery star,

masters of modern pyromancy.

 

But more of these beauties: each a rich

indigo with the purest white heart,

nature’s adornment for each sandstone flag

on the solid slab terrace of which it forms part.

But one or two questions still gnaw at my mind –

needing some knowledge of science and art:

are they born in a womb or a catacomb

beneath these great weights in the dark?

 

Dark as the deepest of dungeons

brightest light is unable to find,

what kind of faith is required to believe

we’ll see despite our being blind?

And if life is begun deprived of the sun

I may shun the light, leave it behind;

and if no-one can see what imprisons me

no-one can see that I’m inside.

 

The flowers don’t quite answer my questions

but their thoughts can I think be inferred;

I sense that their humble origins

mean their voices are not often heard.

But the thing I have learned from our meeting

are that captives can sometimes be lured

and led by a light deep inside them,

and the beckoning songs of the birds.

🌷(3)

◄ A LAPSE OF CONCENTRATION

SILENT GREETINGS ►

Comments

Profile image

raypool

Mon 3rd Jun 2019 11:36

The very questioning you propose is a poetic concept and more to do with internals than science , and draws our attention to the schism between the two worlds. Many people deny any connection at all, thinking that wonders of science are just a matter of the way things work and grow. But life is not that simple, and you inject your imagination and sensitivity into the thrusting of life against all odds. Also I would suggest, the persistence of wild life is a bane to the developers who would woo us with nature controlled whilst paving over all our dreams in reality. ( My soapbox I'm afraid.)

A great salve of a poem Peter!

Ray

<Deleted User> (21487)

Sat 1st Jun 2019 20:46

Peter
I do so love your poems- so still and thoughtful - they have a wonderful calming influence - they wash over the reader and leave a sense of well being. i read them several times for the calm that they bring.

Thank you

Dorothy

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message