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Knucklebones

 

one's mother had died
another was calling from hell
such inventions they needed for a day off work

one couldn't find a clean toilet cubicle
another could fly like a bird but not land
these were some dreams occupying their nights

one counted magpies and looked for more
another was glued to the news- for the cricket scores
topics worthy of speech

one was a band of housemartins weaving the air
another was a horizon-far monoculture field
some scenes sore eyes swept over

one celebrates the progress made
while mourning the lost position
worries inherent in taking a walk

while dice are happy to show their faces
one at a time, we'll keep in mind all the rest
they are real stars in a painted sky
the opposite of our constellations 

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◄ My Two penn'orth

Maia ►

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afishamongmany

Mon 3rd Jun 2019 20:30

Ah Adam! The best thing I've read for while. Enigmatically lucid. Surrealism at it's very best.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Martin Elder

Sun 2nd Jun 2019 22:58

Simply a beautiful piece of poetry

Nice one

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