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Moments By the Sea

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It is the way sea and your eyes
Match each other constantly
Both Put a "spell" on the soul
Divers it, to where is poetry,

Golden sand is a reversible sight
Of your skin, under sunlight
Painting, artists cannot find shape to fit
Music, no one has ever heard yet,

Sunset warms inner coldness I feel
As your voice sneaking gently
Daring me not to leave
I surrendered, willingly,

Chilling air is moving freely
I am drunk on love entirely
Losing myself, completely
To the one who turns beauties into me.

◄ Mirror on the wall

A Journey Through Me ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 23rd Aug 2010 11:35

Francine is right, this does have lovely visual and emotional images plus real drama of 'daring me not to leave'. The last line is a masterful summation of the poem's seduction.

<Deleted User> (5022)

Tue 2nd Mar 2010 22:04

Francine Louis........ Thank you so much,I Am happy that you liked it :)

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Francine

Tue 2nd Mar 2010 21:16

Exquisite!
Beautiful images... especially the last verse.

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