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A Journey Through Me

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The poem by which now I live
More than half of it is fancy
Splendid journey, holding beauty
exists only through me,

So high up, I can see
colorful rainbow, endlessly it seems
birds singing in my ears
sound of leaves, running streams,

Table for two, under one big tree
Lilies and grass so green
A smile on my face appears
As my love, found his way into my dreams,

He has been here early
playing for me a sweet melody
Iris is lifting us gently
while we are falling upward, helplessly,

Between these two arms,I feel complete
With him I breathe differently
this is where, I don't want to leave
For no road leads here, in reality.
 

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 23rd Aug 2010 11:29

Great opening line: The poem by which now I live' and also 'With him I breathe differently'; 'while we are falling upward'. The poem does have a sincere tone of romantic lamentation, as Ann says.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 31st Mar 2010 08:35

A lovely poem Mirna. Very romantic and rather sad.

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