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Indifference

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Clarity of thoughts, actions, purpose, vitality, neutrality
Liquid, solid, and gas
States of matter
States of confusion
States of illusion
Heart has some dents
Scratches too
But it'll be brand new
Next level -

 

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Don Matthews

Fri 21st Jun 2019 05:46

Interesting thoughts here PP
Messy, disordered, dishevelled
But dents, scratches, states of confusion
Will all be erased the next level

(An interesting, thought- provoking poem PP...I like it)

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