DISCOVERY
I used to sit and watch the sea
its closeness to eternity
with all my thoughts centred on self
in a rush, in a rush
like the waves' rough and tumble
of seeming confusion -
an endless discussion;
neither the sky nor the water gave way
yet all the elements had their say.
For myself encased in a world without end
my lonely voices would never blend
until I discovered myself,
my friend.
raypool
Sat 29th Jun 2019 13:06
Thanks for looking in, David and Dorothy.
Lisa, Glad you approved. Very true.
Devon, I see your point there! A word can make such a big difference to the route through a poem. That line is pivotal as you say implying a consortium of shared power, which we find so hard to manage !
Ray