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Someone Identified the Masculine Voice

The male poet overcompensates
With poems of unbridled bravado,
Giving unwanted details of
Disemboweling a deer with
Bare handed desperation.

He counts his sexual conquests
With disquiet and undue clarity,
Each sweaty fumble declared
Victory over inadequacy and
Untold performance anxiety.

Somebody once called him queer
And set him on a course of
Toxic masculinity, but the
Voice that haunted him most—
That he couldn’t escape—was poetry.

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◄ Whispers of Su Dongpo in Bamboo Sway

Momentary Bliss ►

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Randy Horton

Mon 12th Aug 2019 13:05

That's brilliant, Ray.

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raypool

Tue 23rd Jul 2019 20:28

A sort of introverted version of coming out, but not, Randy makes this a dynamic read. A lot of distortion comes from repressed sexuality, and as we know male sex and violence can never surgically separated, only in the meanderings of the romantic. There, I've said it now (just my gut feelings).

Ray

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