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WHERE THE BEST OF POETRY EXISTS BETWEEN THE LINES

 

I live where the best of poetry exists between the lines.

The place is full of corpses decomposing in drawers

and other half-forgotten places.

 

I go back every now and then; dig them up and ask

if they have anything new to say, or did our conversation

finish long ago.

 

I sift through the remains of lost loves and dreams,

long abandoned to their fate; looking for clues as to what they meant

before their untimely demise. Wondering if the dead

can be resurrected as I open a cupboard full of noble

causes, old ideas and hidden meanings. 

 

I share the frustration they must feel floating around

in the ether, hoping once more to see the light  of day.

 

Their omnipresence exists under old letters

and postcards, scribbled notes bearing comments

too distant now to comprehend; kept for nostalgia.

 

Knowing only too well it will fall to others to offer

them up to some funeral pyre; giving them the

burial they deserve.

 

 

 

 

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◄ SORRY, MY MISTAKE

OUT HERE ON THE COAST [revised and re-posted] ►

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Greg Freeman

Wed 9th Sep 2020 09:27

I am going through your oeuvre, Trevor, enjoying every one, and embarrassed that I hadn't discovered you before now. A shining light on Write Out Loud! You're so right about old poems that don't seem to quite work. Keep them! Years later you may find that missing last line that transforms the poem into something special.

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trevor homer

Sat 17th Aug 2019 11:17

When we write for ourselves, and without knowing it convey what others feel, poetry works at it's best. Thanks. T

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 16th Aug 2019 21:01

You can almost feel the spirit of all your unfinished works pleading for a resurrection from their master!

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Lisa C Bassignani

Fri 26th Jul 2019 21:29

Piles and piles of papers with scribbles and doodles

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raypool

Fri 26th Jul 2019 18:04

While I read and comment there is a home made curry simmering away Trevor. It will be a nice cut and dried experience with an immediate reward. Your excellent poem reveals other layers of the undefinable consequences of the rags of old considerations seemingly important. Yes I'm sorry to ramble. Sometimes I want to take over the shooting match. Its seems that you can hover between realities so easily giving a great guidance to the normalities and the edge thereby.
The final lines really do justice to the poem as ultimately it is dust to dust. I can't help but read grim humour into that. Please keep 'em coming.

Ray

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Belinda Sue Kiser

Fri 26th Jul 2019 17:20

I can relate to this. I must have thirty or more journals full of half beaten ideas, story lines, and tidbits for poems. Every so often I will pull one out and think..."wow, what was I thinking?" Thanks for sharing. I enjoy reading poems easy to read and understand. Especially those I can relate to. ?

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