WHERE THE BEST OF POETRY EXISTS BETWEEN THE LINES
I live where the best of poetry exists between the lines.
The place is full of corpses decomposing in drawers
and other half-forgotten places.
I go back every now and then; dig them up and ask
if they have anything new to say, or did our conversation
finish long ago.
I sift through the remains of lost loves and dreams,
long abandoned to their fate; looking for clues as to what they meant
before their untimely demise. Wondering if the dead
can be resurrected as I open a cupboard full of noble
causes, old ideas and hidden meanings.
I share the frustration they must feel floating around
in the ether, hoping once more to see the light of day.
Their omnipresence exists under old letters
and postcards, scribbled notes bearing comments
too distant now to comprehend; kept for nostalgia.
Knowing only too well it will fall to others to offer
them up to some funeral pyre; giving them the
burial they deserve.
Greg Freeman
Wed 9th Sep 2020 09:27
I am going through your oeuvre, Trevor, enjoying every one, and embarrassed that I hadn't discovered you before now. A shining light on Write Out Loud! You're so right about old poems that don't seem to quite work. Keep them! Years later you may find that missing last line that transforms the poem into something special.