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Pronoun

We are

waiting in Winslow wondering 

if the crossed wires

arcing across the way are metaphors

for miscommunication.

If when we said, “Left at the roundabout,”

as a desired direction

a pedestrian intention

not a strictly mechanical turning

of automobile's wheels

whose irrational ratio

of covered distance to perceived measure

goes on without repetition

If we had left them then, 

singular and preferred,

standing, idling

thinking about earlier words...

That if there are no lines there are no lines to cross.

🌷(3)

◄ Olympic Mountains

Good Night Moon...not that book. ►

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 15th Aug 2019 15:19

I'm always standing Idling thinking about earlier words, very relatable!

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 10:42

He says go left at roundabout
The one that is desired
I wanna go right at the other one
The one that's undesired

I dunno what I'm doing now
Drive on the left, or right?
Shit! here comes a squareabout
(Should I be saying shite?)

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Adam Rabinowitz

Thu 15th Aug 2019 07:12

In the country in which I live...we drive on the right side and there are no lefts at roundabouts. I realized after posting this for all the folks on here who drive on the left that part of this poem might get lost in translation.

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