THE SANDS OF TIME
Times were rough for the Punch and Judy Man
this year harder by far
until with the arthritis kicking in
Samuel hit rock bottom.
With health and safety measures newly imposed
looming large
his enthusiasm for the seaside art
like the tide ebbed away.
On that fateful day
while Mr Punch, Judy, the Policeman
and The Dog were silent and stiff
Samuel drew a blade across his swazzle throat.
The children watched as the sand turned red,
thought it was part of the show,
until the parents pulled out their phones
and put the kiddies' dreams aside;
while Samuel's body remained inside
the sands of time ran out.
raypool
Tue 20th Aug 2019 20:34
First off I'm happy to say I'm back on voice again after ferretting out my mp3 player, which worked ok. Happy days.
Don, that was a nice comment thanks. May I say it seems to be well rounded and balanced appraisal !
Spot on David. You know me so well. I do like to mask deeper considerations in strange disguises, not least for their entertainment value, but you may be right; inThe Entertainer (Archie Rice) played by Laurence Olivier you have a tragedy working out. Or indeed Tony Hancock as the Punch and Judy Man. A well thought insight as always!
Thanks Brian - yes the swazzle was an essential bit of kit which we always associate with "That's the way to do it." Performers are fairly insecure to start off with, often averse to parting with money for that very reason.
Graham, thanks for reading and giving this your seal of approval.
I'm fairly comfortable in this genre, pretty weird shall we say.
Thanks all - have nice days.
Additionally I appreciate the likes from Des, Taylor, Devon, Adam and Blackrose.
Ray