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Daffodils and Snowdrops

Daffodils in fancy collars
introduce Spring with a
fanfare of golden trumpets.

Tall and majestic,
they nod a greeting to
the Snowdrops.

The Snowdrops are timid,
not quite meeting the gaze
of the regal yellow blooms.

Trembling delicately
in the breeze they
huddle together for comfort.

The Daffodils are conceited,
They understand
their own significance.

They are humiliated
when, cut and arranged,
looking through the window

They see the Snowdrops
Standing tall and proud.

◄ Wicked Mary Jane

Pretty girl ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 27th Mar 2010 17:11

Delightful.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 23rd Mar 2010 10:20

Hello Kathryn. I agree with Ann on the analogy. I think you should have built up the difference and then the fall from grace would have been more significant. Good idea however.

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 23rd Mar 2010 07:53

Mmm, like a botanical version of the tortoise and the hare! An interesting idea.

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