My Faith and Inspiration Found

Let me even at the expense of my evolution remain

a sharpened blade tucked inside a dusty sheath. 

Let me never taste the sweet liquors and fruit of fame

For I would rather share a glass of tepid water with

the hands that clean up after the ruthless beasts of war

Gladly I'll put the pen aside and grab a hod and shovel

and never write another word; keep silent forevermore. 

be a stranger to lush dwellings and find my niche in a hovel.

For "Us", People, is all that have, all I believe in; so let me not-

-as I draw breath and tread above the ground, before I perish-rot.

 

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Mae Foreman

Tue 17th Sep 2019 09:25

Don
Forcing my writing to come to an end
I agree would be quite drastic
But fear not my aussie friend
I couldn't quit a practice so fantastic!

Adam,

I quadruplely thank you! I like that line too! One of my favorites in this piece.

Thank you both ?

Mae

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Adam Rabinowitz

Tue 17th Sep 2019 02:56

I 2nd or third or 34th the you not giving up the pen sentiment. Sharpened blade in dusty sheath is very good.

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Don Matthews

Mon 16th Sep 2019 23:47

Abandon pen?
Mae never would
Why? because
She is so good.....

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Mae Foreman

Mon 16th Sep 2019 22:49

Thank you dear Jason? It rest assured for now that I know my direction even though I haven't figure out the path quite yet.
Well...alright, I won't give up the pen! In the hopes that my writing doesn't go bad? l! Thanks my friend ?
Mae

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 16th Sep 2019 22:44

Beautifully measured delivery of a powerful, positive message Mae. It has a wonderful offbeat rhythm that adds a conversational aspect to it's delivery. Wonderful!

If I could just ask one thing though?
If you do grab a hod and shovel, please don't abandon the pen, you're too good a writer.

J. x

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