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Escape

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After the party and lots of rollicking

I felt uneasy .

And some droplets of cold perspiration came

on my forehead.

I felt someone following me.

I turned back hastily.

I found nothing except my frail shadow.

Suddenly it grew larger and larger.

I could not move.

I cried for help to drag me out.

I just heard a cackle and felt a suffocation.

I woke up and found my body lying beside.

I ran and ran with my shadow and the cackle.

 

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Sun 22nd Sep 2019 19:56

Thanks a lot Keith and Don.Your comments are blessings to me.

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Don Matthews

Fri 20th Sep 2019 08:15

As Keith says Avishek it builds up fear in the reader but leaves them wondering. You did well to achieve this.....

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keith jeffries

Thu 19th Sep 2019 14:35

A poem very descriptive which allows readers to use their imaginations to the full. The poem also held me in the grip of fear. Quite extraordinary.
Well done
Thank you

Keith

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