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Climb

Climb the hills that you can manage, stand upon the pinnacles,

Find the will to fight the damage levied by the cynical,

Their perturbances don't matter, the lyrical don't shout,

Their disturbances, the chatter of stereotypical doubt,

Concentrate on the peak but be sure to enjoy the climb,

Contemplate the oblique as you endure the passage of time,

There is no use pushing on so hard that you miss the beauty of your ascent,

Only the obtuse would rush to disregard their duty to adore the heaven sent,

There are sharp edges and quick falls, so mind your feet, it's a long drop

There are dark ledges with slick walls but don't retreat, it's wrong to stop,

Just hold your nerve, check your boots and be sure to get a good grip,

The bold don't swerve the tougher routes, they're just sure they won't slip,

Be brave my friend, climb and smile, that face doesn't suit a frown,

Save some strength for the end, the last mile, the only other route is down,

True it will be tough, to reach the height of your own pinnacle,

But it will be reward enough, to reach the site of your lone miracle.

 

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 28th Sep 2019 05:36

Ha ha, no they haven't done that it's true. ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 23:49

Damn aliens at work again Jason. Ask Ruth. At least they haven't pinched your like button.....?

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 27th Sep 2019 22:58

Thanks Ruth, sorry it's taken so long to get back to you, for some reason my notifications seem to have been turned off, or there's a technical fault, whatever it is I don't seem to receive any notifications from WOL anymore, my inbox remains empty?
Not sure. Anyway thank you so much for the kind comments.

J. x

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 27th Sep 2019 18:30

Really enjoyed this Jason, I love empowering poetry. The rhythm really builds you up into feeling you can overcome all the obstacles and negativity. I liked the line
' Their disturbances, the chatter of stereotypical doubt,' .

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 27th Sep 2019 17:38

Thanks Don and thanks Rose, I do like to hit a positive note every now and then ?

J. x

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Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:44

thanks to people like you Jason we come to happily find that the age of positivity is not dead.


enjoyed the read with a ? and a ?!





Rose ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:01

Truly spoken.....And some nice rhyming there as well.....

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