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ROUNDELAY

I hadn't noticed the circus in town

all those immigrant species,

flora and fauna on days of rain

until the sun shone again,

and saw then that the ox carts had arrived

the pony traps,

waggons with all their paraphernalia,

chain gangs of spider's webs

 

all those colours that welcome light

showing off in wild abandon were there,

the dependencies of bees on flowers,

ladybirds in shy shell wings

earnest with leaves,

beetles in caves of dripping wood.

 

The circus was a riot of air and damp earth;

floats, big top sunflowers,

flotillas of flying things on trapezes

pollen crazy, ungainly clowns in dust,

and all this in my trip to the garden.

 

Everything moves on, of course

trundles away with its life source,

but I thanked my lucky stars

for the joy of nature's treasures

soppy with myself.

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raypool

Fri 25th Oct 2019 10:30

Many thanks for opening up the poem and enjoying the spirit of it. A reading like that completes a circle. I started with the image of an ox cart! You may know mussorgsky. Pictures from an exhibition and the slow piece Biddloh. A rustic scene. Your quote is appropriate about Carneval and applies I suppose to pantomime too. Many barriers have been crossed in that genre especially cross gender concepts. A healthy counterpoint to stuffy victoriana.

Made my day!

Ray.

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John Marks

Thu 24th Oct 2019 21:32

"All those colours that welcome light" - especially yellow and red, garish midsummer colours but also the clown's uniform. This is thrilling, this view from the outside, but what about the circus from the inside? The garden as man's regimentation of nature. Control. The carnival is at the centre of the circus and I love your resurrection of the ROUNDELAY. as lyric as song. Extend the significance of the circus (and of singing of the circus), go into it, dig: "The misrepresentation of circus acts as grotesque has significant implications because it places the circus in a carnivalesque relationship to society. Bakhtin’s theory considers carnival as a ‘temporary liberation from … the established order’ that can result in ‘great changes’ because it ‘offers the chance to have a new outlook on the world" (1984 Bakhtin, M. 1984. Rabelais and His World. Bloomington: Indiana University Press. [Google Scholar]

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raypool

Wed 23rd Oct 2019 10:21

Thanks for lookiing in Hannah. Appreciated.

Ray

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Tue 22nd Oct 2019 22:21

Love this writing, celebrating life, beauty.

Hannah

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raypool

Sat 19th Oct 2019 19:33

Thanks Des. Its nice to make a connection , often a forlorn hope with my material. But I'm glad you enjoyed my idea.

Thanks as always for the liking Philip Jon and Jeannot.

Rsy

DESMOND CHILDS

Fri 18th Oct 2019 06:33

A circus I love to see too, but didn’t realise it was a circus until this poem told me.
A new way to look at my garden, I shall always remember this poem when I’m in my garden. Everything moves on the world and life. Great poem Ray.



All the vest des

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