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The clocks go back on Sunday

The clocks go back on Sunday,that's fine.

Slight problem!

Can't remember where I bought mine.

A receipt for the purchase I do lack,

No point really in taking it back.

The clocks go back on Sunday,

For me, not  a refund day.

 

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Don Matthews

Fri 25th Oct 2019 22:38

Brian - I'm beginning to lean more to the prosaic side in my latter years of poetic journey and feel your last comment has a better poetic feel than your original. To me. A sorta recent Coopey-style feel......

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 25th Oct 2019 21:23

Hugh, your comment is better poetry than the original poem.

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Hugh

Fri 25th Oct 2019 20:26

The clocks go back on Sunday,an extra hour in bed.
But shorter days and colder nights,winter lies ahead!
Three yellow weather warnings have been issued by the met.
A 24 hour deluge of rain we are about to get.
Floods are expected due to leaf blocked drains,
A dark and dismal cloudy sky over the U.K. reigns.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 25th Oct 2019 10:44

"Seconds away!". Another knock-out from this dryly humorous source. ?

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New Shoes

Fri 25th Oct 2019 07:52

It's chicks with brick and blocks sir, ticks and tocks sir.
it's all a matter of time

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Don Matthews

Thu 24th Oct 2019 20:25

Chinese junk Hugh. Will let you down time after time. Always keep receipt.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Thu 24th Oct 2019 20:05

We put them back
We put them on
All we lack
is the will to attack
the time that's gone

Solid gone

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