Poetic vision
Reading between
The blurred lines
Defining sublimes
Of reality
Noticing all
That others
Can't see
This how
Poets bring
Clarity
Comments
Explaining a topic
without revealing too much
poetry can do
without causing any offence
to those involved.
I'm reading the lines on my 'puter
They're blurry Ruth, blurry as hell
As instructed I'm trying to read between them
And find those that're as clear as a bell
Still struggling here looking for clarity
My screen? it's all white, lines a blur
I'm s'posed to be a top-class Aussie poet
And everything looks fuzzy. Like fur
What's that Thale? Put me glasses on?......
Gone and embarrassed myself to the whole WOL community now Thale......
She says it was a serious poem...sorry Ruth
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“Defining sublimes”... brilliant verse Ruth❣️
Do.RoThy
Sat 23rd Nov 2019 22:40
Unfloding bud
Unfolds the verse
Time gives the flower
New colour and dimensions
And to the reader
Better grasp of rhythm
Leading to blossoming
This is why we do it!
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Ruth O'Reilly
Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:22
Special Thanks to Po, Do, Don, Vautaw and Nigel for reading.