doe/doh!
Whisper-rustle bushes tell a tale that I am here.
Hiding from you, huntsman, wishing I could disappear.
And yet, and yet, to see your face I’d willingly appear.
For you are the sweetest huntsman
I have ever come upon.
Your stealthy soft approach I fear
it really turns me on.
To see you follow stealthily
in your leggings green.
They really are the sweetest legs
this doe has ever seen.
I know that you must love me
for you follow me so close.
I know that you must love me
I’m the deer that you love most.
I must admit that I am sweet
that really is no boast.
Maybe I’ll let you see me,
just let you have a glimpse.
You can admire my beauty
you won’t have seen it since
you caught a sight of me last spring
when with your eyes like flints
you saw me, and you loved me .
Did you not?
And now your telescope
it is up against your eye.
Because you want to see me,
admire me, as I run by.
How sweet you are to raise your arm
in salutation, dear.
And then I hear a great big bang
and feel it in my rear!
It must be the excitement
and the pleasure of the chase.
I feel a heartracing of joy
as I look up at your face.
It is the last thing that I see
while I am on this place.
And now my head is mounted
oh so pretty on your wall.
To tell the world and everyone
you loved me most of all!
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 11th Apr 2010 20:03
I like it too,Ann. It rollicks along and spins in circles sometimes, but there are also some fine lines and hard observations.