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Damned

Damned by the stars that shone down from the night sky,

Damned in their light on the night of his birth,

The devil's in the detail and the detailed question is, Why

Would such heavenly bodies cast aspersions on his worth?

Damned from the moment that he first opened his eyes,

Damned all to hell as he drew his first breath,

Damned quietly, implicitly, with deep duplicitous lies,

Damned with a curse only curable by death,

Damned by the jealousy of wanton, fickle demigods,

Damned by the cold ocean's breath upon the air,

Damned by the facile, futile, useless demagogues,

Damned by the blood of birth drying in his hair,

And so in those first moments swaddled in this mantle,

Wrapped in his mother's arms, even then he understood,

That damnation was his curse, and his first example

Was the feeling of his hands awash with drying blood,

And he decided, as he had no say in the matter,

And as no stars would listen, nor deity explain,

He would take damnation as his chosen nomenclature,

And he would teach the gods a thing or two about that name.

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 30th Nov 2019 13:04

Thanks Jennifer, Po and Dorothy, yes everything's fine but genuinely, thank you for asking. It's funny, this doesn't really express how I feel now, but it did once, a long time ago. Sometimes we don't go places or visit certain thoughts or say certain things because they feel too raw, or you think you'll be misunderstood, but in the company of poets you should be able to speak your truths and darkest thoughts and trust them, and I'm pleased to say that we can. Thank you my friends.

J. x

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jennifer Malden

Fri 29th Nov 2019 23:21

Wow! Needs to be read again and again. Really impressive Jason.
Jennifer

Do.RoThy

Fri 29th Nov 2019 11:17

What a strong write!! Was quite heavy for my mind....is everything ok Jason? Just felt so damned.....left me Wondering why why why?

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 29th Nov 2019 11:06

Thanks Po, wasn't sure where I was going with this, narratively, but then I just let it draw to its own natural conclusion, I think. Hope it was ok.

J. x

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