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missing person

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So, shyly, she slips out of her life.

She tried it, tentatively,

she dipped a toe into the water

but found it to be cold.

 

Life turned out to be a shoe

that never fitted her.

A shade of lipstick that was just too bright.

A song that played

always too loudly.

 

So now, slipping through

the sea green opacity of another ocean,

at last she feels at home.

Nestling in the shadows

of the seas depths.

 

She never left a note.

What was there to say?

It all seemed so obvious to her,

she couldn’t stay.

 

Her family are waiting

and her picture’s on TV.

She’d be so surprised, she say

“All this, just for me?”

 

 

 

photo crystin moritz

 

 

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 8th Apr 2010 14:41

Hi, thanks for comments. I wrote this on the bus yesterday, where there was a small poster about a missing woman. She looked so carefree in the photo. Bits of her car have been found washed up on the coast near where she worked. So who knows? The character in the poem is made up by me (or maybe is me!) As to the fate of the missing woman, her family still wait and hope!

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Jon

Thu 8th Apr 2010 13:44

Hi Ann,
Enjoyed this poem,another good line is the one about life being like a shade of lipstick that's just too bright.

Has the lady in this committed suicide or is she a missing person?. I know the title says "Missing Person",but wasn't quite sure;especially when the last line seems to suggest that she's gone from our world permanently?

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Tim Ellis

Thu 8th Apr 2010 13:08

At last, a poem I like on this blog! Sad but sweet, with some good imagery- life as a shoe that doesn't quite fit - I like that. Nice one Ann.

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