Living through a lens
Discovering countries
Creating sense from
Nature's disfigured corners.
I wanted to be a war photographer.
It seemed a dream - like direction
to acquaint meaning
Because where there is death
Truth is always near.
Excellent, Kealan - the 'universal' ideas in bold fresh language. 'Creating sense from Nature's disfigured corners' is superb. You inspire me.
Editting point: when you are hyphenating words together to make an adjective, do not add spaces before and after the hyphen; they should stay 'tucked'. Unless this is a deliberate quirk, of course.
enjoyed this piece, m8... the ending is interesting but for some reason i am drew to the fact more truth is always nearer instead off truth is always near..
keep em flowing however bud...
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Rachel Bond
Tue 13th Apr 2010 02:56
dead on that...truth is always near...deadly