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Goatsucker - Villanelle to Hell's Angel

Mistaken for Hell’s Angel when in flight,

A silent sorcerer of secret wood,

His eerie form displaying by the night.

 

By day he lies invisible to sight

Pressed hard to bough and branch of Old Sherwood,

Belying this Hell’s Angel when in flight.

 

The churring call he makes is his birthright -

A challenge to the forest’s neighbourhood,

Preceding his bolero of the night.

 

Toss a rag to tempt him to the twilight,

A foolproof feint - a bait to his manhood,

Eliciting his dancesteps when in flight.

 

He cannot fail to fall to this invite,

Impressing mates with wings which clap and thud -

The covert’s own Hell’s Angel of the night.

 

Such sound and spectre of what woodland sprite

Would chill some ancient stranger’s bones and blood?

Mistaking for Hell’s Angel when in flight

His eerie form displaying by the night.

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Dave Carr

Sat 17th Apr 2010 00:39

John,
I like this.
I think it breaks a few rules but what the hell.
Birdwatching must be better than watching Spurs. - Old Sherwood!

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John Coopey

Fri 9th Apr 2010 21:26

Ann
It is a bird indeed.
I don't recommend however that you google "goatsucker"!
Myth has it that the nightjar suckles from goats at night. I've never seen one while I've been at it.

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 9th Apr 2010 12:55

It's a bird isn't it John? (Or is it a plane? Nonono!)xxYep, just looked in me dictionary - it's a nightjar!
OH! You did it to me again! I just listened to the audio and you give the game away on that! It's "highly camouflaged and semi-crepuscular" you know!

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Fri 9th Apr 2010 09:37

This is glorious! Is it based on the legend of Sweeney?
Have you seen The Mighty Boosh where Bryan Ferry goes feral in the forest and looks after Vince Noir?

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 9th Apr 2010 07:32

Now you just did that to make me look silly!! xx

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John Coopey

Fri 9th Apr 2010 07:17

Ann
Yer tiz

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 9th Apr 2010 07:10

who are you callin' a goatsucker? where's the poem? are you getting forgetful in your old age? ;-) (I know I am!) xx

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