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Refurbished Poem

 

Take an old poem

that was stored up in the attic

set it up on a desk and go to work

strip off the old worn out cliches

fill in the holes of missing words

then sand it down

to the bare essentials

put on a good primer

to give it an even base

then finally paint it

with a bright shiny enamel

of imagery and meter

don't leave any bumps

let it sit

let it dry

in a few hours come back and look at it

with a new sense of accomplishment

a rehabilitated poem

has been successfully recycled

and what was destined for the trash bin

is now a worthy poem.

 

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Tom

Sat 4th Jan 2020 13:05

Nice one DK. Enjoyed this and reminded me to pop up into the attic and see if there's anything else waiting to be refurbished of my own... ?

d.knape

Thu 2nd Jan 2020 12:22

Amazing sometime
what you can find
in the attic
of your mind
things abandoned
left behind
can be refurbished
in new lines.

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