Moral High Ground
I feel serene, I feel sure,
I feel I couldn't ask for more
and from this most exalted place
I can see a crisp landscape
where everything seems good and pure
and nowhere now is in the shade
but a glorious light drenches every glade
and each blade of grass stands proud and true.
I look down as the naked earth's revealed
and a celebration song pours from the sky
lifting dancing spirits high.
alisonsmiles68@gmail.com
Thu 29th Apr 2010 19:10
On re-reading after a few days I totally take your point and may well re-visit. Thank you for your courage in feeding back, it is genuinely appreciated.