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ROCK

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sitting on that rock

smooth and twirled as a rollercoaster

or the oilyslinky hide of a minke whale.

that was me!

 

breezy fingers ruffle hair

smiling, eyes squint at the sun

hoping, alone, not lonely though.

that was me!

 

imagining the space beside me - filled

yet still content to leave it empty

gently dreaming.

that was me!

 

walking up the valley road

tired and hungry, liberated

so many miles behind me, free.

that was me!

 

and now, alone, bemused,

swiped in the face with loss and hurt

but loss of what?

Not loss of me!

 

 

◄ mother nature's victory!!

Venusienne ►

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 21st Apr 2010 07:26

Actually it didn't have anything to do with the painting Win. I was trying to put another photo on but it wouldn't obey! So as I love this one I put it on. I had just been sitting on my favourite rock on the beach and the texture of it inspired me. And I was trying to use the feelings of strength and happiness of moments like that, and the memory of them, to get through the bad bits. And to know the bad bits of life are the less important bits! ;-)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 20th Apr 2010 14:27

This is good, Ann, entertaining. The whimsy turns rock hard very abruptly; a clever technique.

I must try this exercise one day. You have done wonders with your efforts.

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winston plowes

Tue 20th Apr 2010 11:18

I guess this is a reflection on the painting. I always love this exercise. A tried and tested way of creating. keep posting Ann. Win

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