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Francine

Fri 4th Jun 2010 23:43

Thank you Alison for reading and commenting on 'C'est la vie...'
I found it to be quite an interesting challenge.

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Fri 28th May 2010 11:49

Good morning Alison.please excuse late reply for your kind comment on 'pure waste'(been on hols)thank you.Stefan.

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Fri 21st May 2010 11:54

Ha ha both your comments made me smile ;-) I removed the Bio as it seemed so contrived. Of course I am a Billionaire Astrophysicist waiting for science to catch up with my imagination lol ...... Have a great day XX
PS Material for your developing skills lol ;-)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 6th May 2010 10:56

Hi, Alison! Thank you for your comment on my poem "My wishes". Your poems are beautiful. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 14:56

wow, that's the nicest (poetry-related) thing anyone has ever said to me!! Thanks!! xx

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Donna Marie Beck

Wed 21st Apr 2010 13:40

Hello Alison, just saying thanks for your comment on 'Angry mouth', if i manage to add more to it will let you know,Donna.

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Tue 20th Apr 2010 20:03

"cherubim & seraphim"
many thanks for the comments - I wrote the words, but it is a true story. B

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 18th Apr 2010 19:03

Hello Alison, I just thought that I ought to apologise for my (now I think about it) inappropriate comments about Anniversary. Your reply hit me like a brick and I've felt pretty shitty since. So please accept my sincere apologies and ineptness for not reading the work properly. Graham

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Tue 13th Apr 2010 15:33

thank you for the kind comment , i like yo mum it is a mile away from your first offering which shows the depth of your work, nice one

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 10th Apr 2010 18:55

Thank you so much for your comments on Pinny. It was written in a sort of stream of conciousness and I think you have summed it up very well, the ins and outs I mean, not liking it! For that I am eternally greatful!

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Antony Owen

Fri 9th Apr 2010 17:45

Hi

Thanks for your comment on Broken Babies it was kind of you to make time.

I just read your poem Wife & Mother and you yourself write with a passion and energy. The lines (all of them good) which stood out to me were I have kissed the lips of a dead man
and inhaled as his last breath failed.

I always admire poetry that leaves a map of the persons heart that wrote it.

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Sun 4th Apr 2010 10:51

Hello Alison

Thank you for you comment... Dilly dancing...seems to have pleased people... it must conjure happy and pleasing images. Good for them!

Now, your reference to Terry Pratchet... has me at a loss... but ...hey ho...

Once again many thanks

Augusta xx

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Isobel

Thu 25th Mar 2010 12:21

That is an incredibly powerful sample poem Alison. It really hits you and is so simply yet beautifully expressed. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Tue 23rd Mar 2010 19:32

Hi Alison

Great stuff, hope you enjoy exploring the site. A warm welcome to you. Winston

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 21st Mar 2010 16:05

So true what you say about friends! A powerful start Alison. Welcome to WOL.

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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com

Sat 20th Mar 2010 11:24

Many thanks John, still feeling my feet in this world so reassurance that I've made a start is lovely!

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John Coopey

Fri 19th Mar 2010 23:20

Wow, Alison.
Powerful imagery.
I really like the rhythm too, and the sense of anticipation of rhyme which sometimes comes and sometimes doesn't.

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